No More

So this is just the preliminaries..

If it is..

I’m safe..

Never been in such cadence before..

Never been so happy..

Never been so sad..

Author's Note

Honest opinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A short poem with a lot of emotion in the words. Happiness and sadness can be a roller coaster ride. I like this poem. Direct to the point and powerful. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Brook Hughes]

Short but strong poem. Nice word choice. Keep writing!

[Cocoacandy]

shorter than your usuals, and not quite as powerful... but still good, maybe needs a little work and/or developing though...

[A Risen Heroine.]

I Like this Piece a lot.
Keep writing Fallen

love

~A Fallen Heroine~

[MichelleClay]

brief but full of meaning. A 'rhythmic flow' of happy and sad. I liked it.