If I Had A Gun

If I Had A Gun

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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Nobody lives.. 
Not after tonight..
Hate and anger will make their socially distorted images disappear..
That’s one of the things I hate the most..
If I had a gun I gun shatter this dream of perfection..
That gets to me..
Makes me so mad..
F*****g bitchy..
Some fat f**k starts annoying me and a fist sends him flying..
That son of a b***h..
I should shatter his rich world..
His world without sadness..
Only his distinctive madness
I’d shatter everyone’s dreams
If only I had a gun..

A Fallen Hero - If I had a gun
Written : 10/03/2011
Dedication : No one..

© 2011 FallenHeroXx


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seems better that you don't have the gun. killing takes a toll on everyone, not just the loved ones of the victim but the person that committed it. it leaves an ache in your soul and a guilt beyond anything you've ever felt before. this was probably one of your darkest pieces yet

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometime good to keep the gun at home. Anger can put you in a bad place. Killing leave many to mourn and the killing to pay for his deeds. A powerful poem. My father anger taught me. When you act in anger and revenge. Prison and death will be your peace. A excellent poem. A lot of emotion.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


tick tock, brother, the ticking only gets louder until......

Posted 13 Years Ago



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