Opening Myself

Tattered and torn..

Tired and worn..

I should know how to cheer her..

But I don’t.. 

I’m not perfect.. 

Doubts are kicking in..

Am I really the one for her..

I’ve done so much s**t..

I’ve been so close to death..

I’ve tasted that sour taste of dying..

But I survived.. 

Why is it that I doubt myself..

I should be strong for her..

But I guess that The Dream Killer caused it..

That b***h..

Now I’ve finally found My Heroine..

She completes me.. 

She makes A Fallen Hero rise a little..

And still I am so afraid of this connection..

This is just a prayer of a dead man..

I want to keep it coming.. 

I want to share everything with her..

But depression moves in.. 

It strikes me down just when I think I’m perfectly fine..

But no f*****g way..

I have to be thrown to the f*****g ground..

But I keep getting up..

I start with nothing.. 

Then I get everything..

Then I have nothing yet again..

Then I find My Fallen Heroine..

I just don’t want to disappoint her..

Or hurt her..

That’s why I’m afraid I guess..

I think that I should stop writing..

Instead of going totally angsty now..

But if your read this babe.. 

I truly love you..

But the dream killer.. 

She’s f*****g up my head..

Every single night..

Every single f*****g time I fall asleep..

Babe I love you..

A Fallen Hero - Opening Myself..

Written : 19/02/2011

Dedication : Every person I love.

Author's Note

Honest Opinion......

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

In life we are lucky on rare occasions. When someone good comes into a life. Be content and hold on tight. I advice anything bad to say. Say nothing. Love is tender and can be broken by words and bad actions. A excellent poem. A positive ending also.
Coyote

[OT]

powerfully worded as always FH - signs of commitment and dedication! well written - great word choices and imagery! nice!

[Color of the Iris]

Wow... *drops jaw* talk about love and commitment to someone special... I'm sure if this certain "she" were to read this she would be greatly amazed, and she would grow that fuzzy, warm spot inside of her telling her that someone truly loves her for all she is. Damn, this was awesome, man. 1000000/100 :)

[Akshat♥]

never ignore or blame yourself...
be happy stay cool...life is beautiful
nice poem:)

[Chelsea]

I thought that this was really sweet. How A Fallen Heroine completes you, I think that when we find somebody we love life can really cheer up!
Keep your chin up Fallen, it will get better!

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Don't doubt your self! Be happy! :]

[A Risen Heroine.]

Babe you ARE the one, the only one I want to share my whole life with!
Don't ever doubt that, no one can ever take your place.
I love you too babe, more than anything else.

Love

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Michael Jarrell]

Don't be too hard on yourself. You should write something the exact opposite, saying positive things... maybe you will start to believe it.

Good write, nonetheless.

[Michael Davis]

You know what, I think this would make very good song lyrics.