Intro? Beyond Recognition? Read Me A Story And Go To Hell... Intro?

I am so sick an tired..

I’m constantly trying..

I try to please everyone..

But when I take the one thing I want..

The ugly shows it face..

My ugly shows it’s face..

It starts with friendships collapsing..

Then no one cares for anyone..

Then all of a f*****g sudden..

I crash..

I land and I break my legs..

No not my f*****g legs..

My f*****g sanity..

This is only the introduction..

I will never do the consideration..

Though that’s what you want me to..

I’ll never f*****g bow..

The true ugly..

Guess that’s what E.H. Talks of..

I will battle this ugly..

I will fight my way out of here..

I shall rise as a golden eagle..

No..

Not like a golden eagle..

As A Fallen Hero..

The best part of falling..

Is dying..

My mind..

Extinct..

My heart..

Alive..

My love..

A victim of A Fallen Hero..

But I told her..

She agreed..

I hope she’ll manage..

Oh my god..

Where was I?

I have to stand up for myself..

And as I start out..

Death will be close..

As I progress..

Death will be a constant battle..

But I’ll just kick him in the balls..

And spit some evil slime for E.H. 

Maybe say that E.H. is looking forward to f*****g his a*s in hell..

Where did I end up?

In your moms a*s..

You f*****g b******s..

Try to understand my situation here..

I will live on!

And once again..

It’s A Fallen Hero to you..

I’ll randomly rape you if you don’t get it..

Now f**k off…

Author's Note

Honest Opinion..
And once again creds for The Ugly goes to E.H.
All Hail King Scum

Fallen

Reviews

[Drako]

this one seems bi-polar, but i like it. the rape thing is an interesting way of expressing the anger or irritation you feel. very interesting. the reference to another writer makes this funny, in a dark way. i like it though, as usual

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild ending to this poem. I don't know. I always like leaving the s**t behind and not wasting my time with useless people. A powerful poem. Life can be a pain in the a*s. But the lucky go forward and become king of the B.S. A lot of anger and negative energy. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chelsea]

This is crazy stuff Fallen :) I really like how you're branching out in your writing. A few new topics were starting to see from you.
I like how you incorporate writers off the cafe.. A Fallen Heroine, the one and only Munroe! A very cool twist!
My favourite lines....
Death will be a constant battle- Just because it's so strong. I think death or suicide is a battle for many!
I’ll never f*****g bow- I love this because it's so rebel. And the whole swearing in it just makes it all the more better. Go Fallen :)
I found this writing to be pretty neat stuff. But maybe tidy it up, it's a bit confusing. Sorry if I annoy you by saying that, I hate critical reviews.
Other than that a very strong piece that gives a person much to think about. Great stuff!