A Simple Letter

So here’s just another letter..

This not of hate..

How are you doing..

I keep hoping..

But I have to push the thought away..

Just because I know that you’ll.. 

Say… 

No..

F**k this…

I think it’s really sad to see what became of the two of you..

I hope you know that..

Let’s compare scars..

Or at least talk about how both of us is doing..

You’ve been here to long..

This winter was so cold..

I know that we hardly know each other..

But we’ve had some times I wouldn’t trade for the world..

I want to tell you everything..

That’s really a big thing coming from me..

I mean it..

I swear by my grave that you’re not supposed to be sad..

You’re way to pretty for that..

Seriously I could kill that guy for you..

Another piece that always will contain some significance..

Real trust is hard to build for me, but I feel like I can trust you..

A little smile from you is better than a thousand beautiful guitars to me..

How come I can just openly write that to you?

I am so scared of this friendship actually..

Feeling these depressive days at last..

Ending it with a bang..

Like a shattered mirror..

Like the last piece of a mirror, the last piece soaked in blood..

Forgetting life and time when I’m writing this for you..

Other things as well..

Realizing that nothing I do will ever be nearly good enough..

You must not be sad..

Oh, because when you’re sad so am I..

Under and under.. I feel so f*****g infantile..

Nobody ever tried to do as I do…

I know that to be true..

But at least I can live with another breakdown..

I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again..

It’s A Fallen Hero

A Fallen Hero - A Simple Letter

Written : 11/02/2011

Dedication : Personal.. 

Author's Note

A Letter For A Friend...
What do you think?
Honest Opinion..

Fallen

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good letter. I have wrote many letters that were never sent. We do things in love and in disappointment that can't be repaired. Time is the only way we learn forgiveness of ourselves and others. A excellent letter and poem.
Coyote

[OT]

ahh very nice!! an evocative write! - you're pimping out the descriptions very well! making for a great read!! some great little nuggets in this one - slamming the fallacies - reality checks to be made - the lot! nice!

[E. A. Fielder]

you must not be sad because when you're sad I am... simple but it's true. It's like you threw it back in that persons face all those "I would die for you"'s and "We'll be together forever"'s and "when you cry I cry" fairy tale lies. Real relationships aren't made of promises you can't keep. I like this. It had a lot of simple lines that most people would over look.

[Brad]

i judge most things (writing, music, movies) by their ability to envoke strong emotions...something that's either tangible or relatable, this peice does all of the above. thank you for taking me on this ride, how beautifully solemn, angst riddled, yet peaceful...nice work

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Marvelous!

[A Risen Heroine.]

wow, his is sad and yet beautiful.
I love it, don't ask me why, because I don't know I just do.
Keep up the amazing work and thank you so much for sharing!

~A Fallen Heroine~