Tattoos

What if I never chose life back then?

What if I couldn’t bear to live with my mistakes?

Would I say f**k everything

Would I leave without saying…

Goodbye?

I want tattoos  to mark my body..

They should lick my body like fire..

I want tattoos with my name..

Showing my true name to everyone…

A Fallen f*****g Hero

F*****g a*****e is my best description.

An invitation to my own nightmare..

Love is what made me.

Lingering in my f*****g head all the f*****g time…

Eternal rest was my reality until I awoke…

Not a f*****g dream..

Here to stay

Eternal resting shows in my eyes.

Riding in a wave of sun…

Offspring of a w***e and a m**********r..

A Fallen Hero - Tattoos.

Written : 01/02/2011

Dedication : No one…

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like tattoos. If I didn't get marry. (Wife say I have enough) I would have many more tattoos. I would have them to tell a story of a long and good life. Tattoos need reason and purpose to be on your skin forever. A excellent poem. I like the description and story in your words tonight.
Coyote

[Natalie]

This has a bitterness to it beyond the obvious anger. I like the line "What if I couldn't bear to live with my mistakes?" A lot of people wear their mistakes like tattoos. I think you have talent. What makes me sad is that so much pain can flow from a 16 yr old.

[Red Brick Keshner]

The permanence of tattoos may be a bit much. Poetically this works but in day to day life you might consider how times do change and one day we may need laser removal of the ink stains we bear from our past. We haven't truly fallen until we say so ourselves.

[E.H. Monroe]

F*****g a*****e is my best description.
An invitation to my own nightmare..
mine too and its worn with pride. Eventually when I make giant things happen the Ugly will take over and throw poisonous darts at the Kardashian sisters. We are all the offspring of w****s and m***********s..now we get to prove it

Nicely done

[Cocoacandy]

um... well... im pretty sure that you should think bout how much you use the word 'f**k' in ur poems... it causes them to lose integrity a bit... but otherwise nice work, keep it up!
*cocoabean*

[Drako]

tattoos are fun. i have two and will certainly get more in the future. so if you feel the need to get a tattoo, at least make it meaningful

[Chelsea]

I like it but a bit brutal!
I want tattoos to mark my body..
They should lick my body like fire..

I love this stanza! The whole idea of tatoos being in a poem intrigued me! I like this very much---
And a suggestion--- I would take out some of the swearing. Being honest, it distracts from your poem. "
What if I never chose life back then?- Also this line, a bit confusing?!?!
I like your style for sure, it's really developing!
:)