Something...

Read my mind 

Like an open book.

Your kiss was a hook.

A great thing too.

Now he’s getting you.

I f*****g hate that.

I’m not exactly mad.

More like sad.

And you just picked me up.

To shoot me the f**k down.

I f*****g hate that.

You’re the most stupid sadistic abusive f*****g b***h.

Born by a cheap s**t who just f***s around with everyone..

E.H’s Female side…

But you burned my pages…

You knew how I felt.

I shared myself with you…

And here we are… 

At the end of another foolish romance..

Reflections of your false ideals of a heartfelt romance…

At least it was heartfelt to me…

I felt like I was complete again…

Not now

Not ever..

Is it here to stay again..

Depression paints the walls of my life..

I hate it..

Why did you have to do it?

I gave you time and you gave me s**t…

F**k you

You stupid motherfucking little w***e…

No not w***e… 

Satan’s f*****g b***h… 

yea that’s it…

Satan’s f*****g you right up the a*s.

I know your faith in Christianity is strong.

That’s the reason I so..

B***h…

I f*****g hate you…

A Fallen Hero - Something

Written : 30/01/2011

Dedication : Way to f*****g personal...

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of anger and disappointment in this poem. Sometime when the pain is near. We are pissed off. In 30 years you will be thankful for those girls that gave you the taste of sugar. I know my words mean nothing today. A excellent poem. In the end life is fair. Karma is a fair judge.
Coyote

[Brook Hughes]

This poem shows a lot of hate and emotion. But I enjoyed it. Keep Writing:)

[Cocoacandy]

well...this poem is really good in that it is full of emotion. at the same time though, i think that there are some points where the poem seems to stumble... for example:
"I’m not exactly mad.
More like sad.
And you just picked me up.
To shoot me the f**k down."
this doesnt seem to flow as well as you intended. The poem jumps topics quickly instead of gradually... but otherwise, it is a good write.. thanks for shaing it with us..!
*cocoabean*

[E.H. Monroe]

they always get ya with the kiss don't they?
The feeling that everything is great and perfect in the world built for two people. Then the hammer falls and all you can say is "what the f**k happened?"
That, my friend, is what they call "the player."

Nice work

[Drako]

wow, that's more anger than usual. i like this because you hold nothing back. its an expression of pure anger and pain, filled with everything you obviously want to say to the person

[felica mariiee]

Wow this is filled with anger, disappointment, sadness, and I feel like there is more meaning to this the meets the eye. Remember though what they dish out to others the will get back on themselves .

[A Risen Heroine.]

wow, you sure got disappointed....
This poem is filled with anger, pain and disappointment.
Tell me if you need to talk!
I love this piece a s**t ton!
~A Fallen Heroine~