Wake Up

Wake Up

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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I dwell with monsters.
They give me s**t all the time.

F**k off is all I say.
Eternal struggle is all I feel.
Love is gone for me.
Like I really gave a damn..
So f*****g fake.

Life is really not that simple.
I have found out.
Keeps me going though.
Eternal struggle is what made me

Towards a raging fire.
Hate burns only in my heart.
Eternal struggle is what keeps me going.

Ending all of my battles in one night.
No more f*****g pain.
Don’t say anything. 

I am getting the f**k out.

Keep on coming back.
Nothing is what you say to me.
Overrun by all your feelings.
Wake up from your f*****g life like dream and see the truth.


A Fallen Hero - Wake up.
Written : 26/01/2011
Dedication : To my enemies and my allies.

© 2011 FallenHeroXx


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"Towards a raging fire.
Hate burns only in my heart.
Eternal struggle is what keeps me going"
Hate is a true motivation. When someone is overtooken with sadness and disappointment. Hard to see daylight and reason to be alive. Hate make us get up and tell the world to f-off. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can see that you like to express your anger through writing. That's a good thing! Keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like the ending the best. i like the anger you express and the overall message.

Posted 13 Years Ago


keep on rolling with that chaingun of wicked poetic intent.

indeed, we all need to wake up at on epoint or another but we usually go right back to lksepe cuz no one likes what they see

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this, in the sense of the raw emotions that are expressed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


:D sounds like me when I'm seriously pissed off!! ^_^ sometimes tributizing pain is wonderful :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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