Just Three Lines Pt 2

Moving up while I’m going down.

Hated with love, feared with anger

Alive and well, sick and twisted on the inside.

A Fallen Hero - Just Three Lines Pt 2

Written : 23/01/2011

Dedication : Way to personal to share

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

nice work those 3 lines sure spoke lots and lots. i really liked this one. great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Emotion insure we are alive and well. A very strong short poem. To be alive. Easy to feel disappointment.
Coyote

[Drako]

short, simple, descriptive. i like it

[Lindsey]

I like it, it grabs peoples attention.

[Dische]

Really good, you often write very dark I like it