Helluva Good Time

Goodbye for long.

Give me a good song

I’ll play it at your funeral.

I’ll sing you to sleep

Rip us apart.

So far, so long.

Give me a chance to help you.

I’d scream your name.

I truly love you

I want you so bad.

So throw me aside.

Leave me there.

Make me Die!!

I f*****g hate you

You chose Him.

Slay me and bury my soul.

Make me leave you.

The Fallen Hero

Falls again.

A simple hope.

Crushed in the flames of his Heroine.

Farewell

A Fallen Hero - Helluva Good Time

Written    -   22/01/2011

Dedication - Way to personal.

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

nice work here dude, and i love that anger you always put into these poems, they really make your works unique. those feelings of betrayal definitely manifest themselves here. good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Great emotion and anger. A powerful poem.
Coyote

[Drako]

emotions all over the board in this one. i like how you keep the theme of the hero and heroine going in your work these days. it adds something to your writing

[Dische]

Wow really good you are an amazing writer

[felica mariiee]

Wow. This started out just sad like a break-up song would go and then it turn to depressing and heart-breaking it made me want to cry. The feeling of betrayal, and the feeling that when the left your whole world came down it all to common for me. Over all though this is amazing.