Forgive Me

Here I stand once again.

Suffering tasting lips of pain.

Fill me to the brim with your love.

O.D. on my bed.

Really I will.. 

Give me the second chance you talked about.

I realized that I have a conscience

Veteran army’s of hate and sorrow marches towards each other.

Eliminating themselves for my own good.

More and more, that’s all you give.

Eating up all of me.

Spare me of my misery.

I feel this pain since the chat with Etheridge 

I hope to hell he’s okay.

I send him letters everyday.

Another broken home torn apart by war.

As I whisper the lines of a poem 

“F**k these wars” 

It has become my guardian.

If I don’t read it once a day I crash.

Fucked and wanting to O.D.

O.D. on that pill

Relying on nothing but will.

Giving in to this depression, Finally.

I gather myself in a dark crawlspace.

Veterans in my mind. Stop.

Etheridge come back now, Please.

More and more, that’s all you give.

Eating me alive.

I want to scream again. 

Call this out and f**k it’s plans up.

Just to be on the safe side.

I will live on

Won’t I please?

Free me of this disease.

I can’t be free.

Forgive Me

A Fallen Hero - Forgive me.

Written - 20/01/2011

Dedication - Myself, Depression and Etheridge.

Author's Note

Honest opinion

Used a coyote line in there..
Thx to coyote..

Fallen

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a good, but sad write...I really enjoyed this, but I don't think anyone should ever O.D...but there was tones of imagery within this poem. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

[felica mariiee]

amazing. truley amazing.

wow, it was dark yes but fantastic. i could feel the emotions you put into it. it was so vivid and i loved the word choice. over all it was amazing.

[Drako]

getting considerably darker now, aren't you? there's a lot of depression in this, depression i would hope you overcome

[Frank F. Atanacio]

an honest graphic, but emotional piece--I LOVED IT