Heartfelt. Hateful.

Nothing here

No one left anywhere

Just a raw touch of empathy

I have not even thought of sympathy

I don't want it..

I don't want it, Nor do i need it.

ever get that feeling

Like everything you do is wrong?

That's all i'm feeling.

I hate myself.

I hate this slob of a body.

I am such a b***h.

I won't ever grow up with this.

Why can't i change.

I want to save everyone!

But i can't!

A Fallen Hero - Heartfelt, Hateful

Written : January 18th 2011

Dedication : Myself

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

great poem you have here, i just love those very powerful words. those feelings of deep anger sure fuel the fires of hatred in this one. everything turns out right however when one learns to love himself/herself. very good job here!

[Drako]

this one is sad. a lot of pain in the words, pain and frustration at the turmoil of life

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I feel the pain in your words. You want to help everyone but first a person has to help themselves and love themselves. Self-hatred will make your life hell.
Sorry for the 'lecture'... your poem expressed so well the feelings of loathing felt.
Good way to get things off your chest as they say.. write.
Good write.

Chloe

[Chelsea]

This was a bit confusing. It seems like your talking about more than just trying to save people/yourself. But it was really good!
I like your simple words....
Just a raw touch of empathy
I have not even thought of sympathy

Those were clever :) But I get what your saying about change.... How do you? When you feel so far gone? I hope I get your message! Good one Fallen :)

[Brook Hughes]

Great poem. Everybody has a choice to choose to save themselves or those around you.

[Coyote Poetry]

We can change when we desire. Hardest person to turn is the person looking back at you in the mirror. A powerful poem. Sometime we must reach rock bottom to want to climb out of the hole. To be saved. Must be the will of the person swimming in misery and s**t. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[A Risen Heroine.]

You can do what you want Fallen.. Just think about it.
It's a lie that you can't save anyone... you've saved me!
All in all a good poem!
Please don't hate yourself that miuch, odn't call yourself a b***h, you're a precious friend of mine!
Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~