Lie

Lie

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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Give me a candle to shine through the darkness.
To make me see and believe in my wrongs and rights.
To sit the f**k down and cry.
To make the world know that I am a lie.
I know that I am
A Lie.
Yet lies are not able to tell tales.
A tale of broken men and fucked up memories.
Another broken man.
Another broken heart.
I am a lie

© 2011 FallenHeroXx


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FallenHeroXx
Honest opinion.. This is what i think of myself...

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Fallen you sure isn't a lie, you're a great personal friend I know I can talk to when I'm feeling down or when I just want to chat.
Don't think you're a lie, because you're not.

You did a great job, thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Plays like a song..Dark, cathartic..

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is an intersting poem, that i do not agree with. you are not a lie. you're a sixteen year old going through a bit of hell at the moment. you're at a point in life where you're still finding yourself. that doesn't make you a lie. it makes you human

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, this brought tears to my eyes :( Very effective. I must say that your not a lie. You know, your an innocent sixteen year old. But the world just took you down. It happens to us all at some point :( I'm kind of in one of those at the moment.
This is so good!
I love the line about seeing right and wrong. And about sitting down and crying. But I guess sometimes you've got to admit your just a joke and got to get back in the game :)
Well done!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like how your expansion of style and form is changiing. You're moving in all directions and expanding ideas in a big bad way.
Nicely done and keep the form changing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem. Nobody should have to think of themselves as a lie though!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Some lies and pain make us wiser and stronger. When we reached the lowest point. Can't get worst? We hope. A very strong short poem. Happy endings are few in a life. More people learn from error then from common sense. A strong poem. You made me think.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't believe you're a lie... you're life may be, but you aren't. Your gift to write is greatly appreciated by many, and I'm sure many people love, and adore you here, like A Fallen Heroine clarified below. I agree with her completely... 100/100

~ Iris ~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fallen you sure isn't a lie, you're a great personal friend I know I can talk to when I'm feeling down or when I just want to chat.
Don't think you're a lie, because you're not.

You did a great job, thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 18, 2011
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Tags: teen, love, suicide, hate, death, sorrow, palle pallesen, saddanishemokid, fallenheroxx, Poem

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