Unnamed and Undying

A heart broken

A tale told.

A lie revealed

My love dead.

She showed me that I could feel real.

But no matter, I got dumped.

Short of saying bye.

I sit alone again and cry.

This deceitful promise.

Shows me sadness.

Throws me to the ground and tries to hold me.

Never! 

F**k. No one will ever get me down like that again.

No one is strong enough for that.

Now I want to get out alive.

I didn’t want that before.

I’m broken in pieces of deceitful honesty

I have no more empathy

I fake empathy to make people like me.

Now f**k off with that damn sympathy

I want you to hate me.

I want you to hate me

I want you to live on

I’ll stand strong

You couldn’t shake me then.

Can’t shake me now.

My room is my place of healing.

Pen and Paper my means.

To this depression.

I Hate You

To that girl 

You disappointed me and now we’re through

Now an empty f*****g night.

No dreams. 

No light

All there’s left is to fight

A Fallen Hero - Unnamed and Undying

Written : 16/01/2011

Dedication : To personal to say

Author's Note

Another poem...
A Fallen Heroine : Gratz for the idea.
E.H. Monroe : Thanks for the means of doing.
A Fallen Hero : Thanks for being myself.

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Brook Hughes]

Well written poem. My favorite lines are I want you to hate me.
I want you to hate me
I want you to live on
I’ll stand strong. Keep writing! I enjoy reviewing poetry!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we need to stop. Look at our life. Re-adjust and go forward. Writing had been my peace for 35 years. Sometime life seem to be useless and not worthwhile. But all we need is a new goal and if lucky someone else to give us hope and motivation. A excellent poem. Strong words and emotion in this poem.
Coyote

[E.H. Monroe]

Get em.
That anger you got burns pretty bright but amidst all the horror a line pokes out

My room is my place of healing.
"Pen and Paper my means.

That unleashing of the bloodthirsty where the pen becomes the sword and you writew your woes into lines of red.

Ncie work

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is such a strong poem, your feelings is raw and makes this a better read than I thought was possible.
Awesome job and thanks for sharing!
Keep on going Fallen!
~A Fallen Heroine~

[Jessie McRiley]

Really powerful poem!

[Undying Glory]

nice work here, i sure love this write! this was a very powerful poem you have crafted here, very well done. that hate and raw feelings in this one sure make this good. good job here man!