Her

Finally found the rest I need.

In the bottom of a f*****g bottle

I am not mad

I am not sad

And I definitely don’t regret a thing

Drunk as piss and I get f*****g sad

What the f**k is wrong with me?

I love her.

I know that

And I definitely wouldn’t leave her.

I am crying over this thing

Well I’m afraid I’d just disappoint her.

I don’t want that.

I know that

And I definitely don’t want to disappoint her.

Oh how I love her.

I’m so scared.

I don’t want to be

I know that

And I definitely don’t want to scare her.

I f*****g love Her.

I f*****g love Her.

I f*****g love Her.

She's my drug.

She's my addiction 

Her.

She's the one I love

Her and only Her

A Fallen Hero - Her

Written : 15/01/2011

Dedication : That girl I love

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Color of the Iris]

This was great! It was like that song "Addiction" by Dope... "She's my cocaine, heroine, alcohol, and vicadin, she's my addiction..."

I find the character you portray in your writing to be one of confusion. You're in love with someone, f*****g scared of screwing it up all to hell, and if she really loves you, she'll love you for the psycho-maniac you are... :) Great job, bravo... 100/100

[E.H. Monroe]

I like the borderline frightening obsession. This can be read in a man who is twisted by the fates, or by a nutcase in a room with pictures on the walls.
The fact that you hide it IN the poem is great. No author's notes, no blurbs, just lunacy at its finest.

Ncie work

[robyn.alexandra]

From my last read you've definitely improved! your developing your thoughts more which is great, and the flow is better!
But I'd advise developing your images more, developing the ideas you use. Add more detail, describe things more.

Otherwise, I liked it!

[Chelsea]

Love it!! Your writing is improving so much----- Your becoming a great poet!
This is really wonderful. You tell such a great tale of a girl becoming that drug! Glad you've found that :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Great joB~~ :]
Glad you found someone to love. :]

[Drako]

i can so relate to this now. love can become something like an addiction, especially with all the obstacles holding you back

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is very romantic!
You did an awesome work and thanks for sharing!
~A Fallen Heroine~

[Coyote Poetry]

Booze lead us into a downward fall. The poem got more hopeful at the end. Love make us strong and can make us fall down into a self made hell. A powerful poem. Some stories are to teach us. Some stories are left to torture our mind. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kathryn Saunders]

Awwww. Very very romantic. I like how you can write things dark and depression, then switch over to something like this with easy. great job. 10/10

[OT]

I liked it!! you're including more descriptions which is great!! and there was this little rhyme scheme going which fitted the flow and structure of it really well!! a strong ode to your love, or "her"!!