The Heroine Part Two

Part two of the heroine's story. This concludes the story

She sees Him wandering around

Is He waiting to be found?

She hope She was in Love

That he was the one from above

She hated this Emotion

But She had a lot of Devotion

She was His dream

He was Her self esteem

She had to use Him

The said His fate was Grim

All the thoughts over whelmed Her

They revolved around Her

She was still to shy

To even wet her eye

The sharks were Conspiring 

Around Her bed

It held to much of Her head

She hid Her skeletons in Her closet

What if He found them?

He found it now

He hit Her with His Iron  Fist

She didn’t fight back

She just packed Her bags

As She screamed goodbye

A Fallen Hero - The Heroine Part Two

Written : 07/01/2011

Dedication : Story

Author's Note

Honest Oppinion

Reviews

[Drako]

this poem had a sadder feel to it. especially the ending. but a good poem all the same

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem filled with anger and desire to hurt. Strong words left no innocence or desire to find peace. Giving pain will always come back in karma. I have stories son that one. A sad ending to a powerful poem.
Coyote

[luciddreamer]

Actually I liked this one better than part 1...had more emotion....imo

Peace
Robin