The Letter

The Letter

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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My song The Letter

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As I tried to write you this song
I found out what went wrong
I wanted to be in your life
Thought you wanted to be in mine

Oh oh oh oh
Woah oh oh 

I found at that I missed you
I hope to god he was worth it
I was so mad to start with
Now I’m lost without you

Oh oh oh oh
Woah oh oh

I wanted to see your eyes
But now they’re filled with lies
Hell I loved you too
Now I can’t get through

Oh oh oh oh
Woah oh oh

Now I’m so lost in sorrow
And hatred dawns upon me
As an exit to nowhere
And I can’t get through 

Oh oh oh oh
Whoa oh oh

Now I want to see you
In my real life
I wish I still had you
That makes this harder to say

Oh oh oh oh 
Whoa oh oh


Now I’m so lost in sorrow
And hatred dawns upon me
As an exit to nowhere
And I can’t get through

A Fallen Hero - The Letter
Written : 07/01/2011
Dedication : The Lines

© 2011 FallenHeroXx


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Rock on dude.. got my air guitar out and waiting to join the band! Write on..

Posted 13 Years Ago


*Taking out his guitar and prepares to strum*
What chords are we using?

Posted 13 Years Ago


that would be an awesome song!! Oh oh oh oh
Whoa oh oh

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it! This would make a wonderful song!
Good flow, powerful words, awesome stuff!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can't sing a note. But the poem feel like good music to me. The flow and the words roll with ease. I could feel the sadness and loneliness in the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's beautiful, I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


ooo, a song. that was interesting. i liked this, because i could kind of sing it myself

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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