Hero And Heroine

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The Hero at large

He fell from the stars

He cried to delay

For his heart will find a way

His adversaries many

Yet he can’t find any

Friends to love

No one has been sent from above

He has been changed for becoming

A creature of cunning

Heroine of love

Has she been sent from above?

Can she find the pieces?

Of this broken peace

Death was the promise

And just as she promised

He is going to die

She mustn’t cry

The Hero will lay

Till she parts from his way

A Fallen Hero - Hero And Heroine

Written : In the fall of 2009

Dedication : A School Asignment

Author's Note

Honest Oppinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Written in the logic of the writers of the past. Few had good endings. In the days of old. Love was a sentence of a bad death. I like the vision you create with your words. Death will allow the heroine to know sadness and part ways. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[A Risen Heroine.]

I would like to know a bit more about Heroine.
This poem is one of my favorite poems ever! :D
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! :D

[Drako]

this is an interesting piece. now, we get not just the hero, but something on the heroine. it would be interesting to see another piece on just the heroine, to see how she helps or hurts the hero

[Chelsea]

I love this poem :) It rhymes and flows wonderfully!
I sort of like the idea of the hero parting. Maybe because he loves this heroine and wants the best for her? That's the idea I got from it.
Oh well, great write :)