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Another poem.

These glossy eyes

They’ve seen too many lies

This hollow sadness

Is it a brush of madness?

F**k I’m so sad

Still I am not mad

I am feel like my hate is fed

Is this all in my head?

My withered heart has been broken

Too many times, in too many ways

I feel like I have seen too many depressive days

Hell I feel like I am falling, or maybe I have fallen?

Over these past few months, I’ve found something.

Something like hatred or oblivion.

Damn I would like her to obliterate me.

Could she possibly stop having her attacks?

This damned destruction of my mind.

Hell I would like to wait for her.

I think I might be able to do that.

Ginny is the one I like now, is she perfect for me?

I am afraid of another heartbreak clearly.

I show it and I tell it, just so she knows

I never wanted all these f*****g depressive days

Hell I feel like I am falling, or maybe I have fallen?

I feel like everything is revolving around Ginny. 

My thoughts are consuming that memory of her.

I think I want to throw away all of my pride and tell her.

Well it might seem stupid, has my pride been shattered?

I see her lips in front of me, her beautiful eyes.

I love her face, it looks like she’s never sad.

It has truly driven me mad

Is she the perfect one for me?

And once again I sit awake at 6:30 in the morning.

Hell I wanna go to Ginny right now and tell her how I feel.

I didn’t think of these damned depressive days.

Hell I feel like I am fallen, or maybe I have fallen?

A Fallen Hero - Questions

Written : The Third Of January 2011

Dedication : My Ginny

Author's Note

Honest Oppinion

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is beautiful, thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! :D

[Christopher.Holmberg]

Keep asking questions 'fallen. Never stop questioning the people or things around you...eventually you will find the answers, but ultimately...the answer is in the question...the perlexing nature of things can sometimes be irritating yet it's all an illusion; take some time to smell the roses. Simplicity is the key, complexities are the vault. 10/10

[Drako]

seems like an inner fight with yourself here. wanting to tell her, but being held back by your own fear of being hurt again. unable to decide if you even want a relationship again because of how the last one ended. so often we hear that we should follow our heart, but that's often really hard to do when it's been broken before

[Coyote Poetry]

The battle to control emotion and feeling ain't easy. Life seem to get harder. We need to talk things out in a civilized way. I like the emotion in this poem. You are trying to find peace and logic in your words. A excellent poem. Thank you. I like the last lines.
Coyote