Hate

Hate

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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Another song i wrote down in my notebook. This is dedicated for my friend Sofia Larsen who killed herself back in the summer of 2009

"
Can’t find what I need
To go any further
With this life
I have to move on

The death of you 
Almost destroyed me
Now I feel
Dead inside

This rage leading
To sorrow
This blind aggression leading
To death

This blind hate
This dead fate
This last chance
To kill you

This heart is almost broken
These thoughts have almost won
This mind is surely deranged
This flesh feels rotten
The suicide thoughts are coming closer
Time is running out
The hate grows larger

My fate is to hate
The dead faces in my mind
The last breath I’ll take
The last face I see 
Will be yours 
In love In death
Forever

A Fallen Hero - Hate
Written : Winter 2009 
Dedication : Sofia Larsen

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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FallenHeroXx
Honest Oppinion

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there's possibly nothing worse than losing a friend, especially in such a way. this was a beautiful way to honor her, and i would think she'd appreciate that you felt so strongly for her

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful piece. Love it, very dark but this is a masterpiece. I'm impressed

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh my, so sorry for you loss :(
That is so rough. Suicide is such a hurtful thing. Hugs :)
This is such a beautiful peace in honour of your friend. It made me cry.
-Chelsea

Posted 13 Years Ago


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