Won't Be So Long

Won't Be So Long

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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Old a*s song wrote it in 2009 i think :) well here it is

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Hearing your voice
Saying f**k off
I will take off
But don’t miss me

You don’t need hatred
Hate devours all feelings
Inside we’ll all die

Never again shall I bend to you
You’ll never see what I’ve been through
It won’t be so long
Till we’re gone

Why did you leave?
Don’t come back
I’m so lost
But I don’t need you

You stand alone
Against your darkness
Soon you’ll fade out

Never again shall I bend to you
You’ll never know what I’ve been through
It won’t be so long
Till we’re gone

Stuck here
Lost there
Dead on the floor
Stuck here
Lost there
Dead on the floor
Let’s fade!


Never again shall I bend to you
You’ll never know what I’ve been through
It won’t be so long
Till we’re gone

A Fallen Hero - Won't Be So Long
Written : The Spring of 2009
Dedication : Everyone

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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Not only was this exactly what I needed, when I needed it but you did a great job expressing the frustrations

Posted 6 Years Ago


i agree with watch the world this could be a song i really really like this alot

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This could almost be a song. Brilliant. XD I like the almost bluntness of it. Brilliant

Posted 13 Years Ago


A poem that is straight to the point and honest. I was old school. I drowned my sadness in good booze. Death is for the weak. Better to hang around and torture a few more people with your present. A strong ending to a poem of disappointment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


inside we all die.. its good.. its show you how you can depends on yourself.. :) good job

Posted 13 Years Ago


pretty good :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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