Doubts

Thoughts thrown on paper

This is the last time

I’ll stand up

I’ll show my scars

Just don’t rip them

Oh the feeling of love

I’m scared of it now

Sadly I’m so f*****g afraid

Of f*****g it all up

I am far from home

It seems like 

Everyone hates me?

I don’t know anymore

Author's Note

Honest Oppinion

Reviews

[DearWorld]

Everybody goes through times of doubt and you illustrated it wonderfully. I can completely relate to the middle verse. It's easy to be afraid of trying again after everything blowing up in your face. But I've learned that taking a deep breath and putting one foot in front of the other can lead to better things. Keep your chin up, kay?

[*skittlez*]

i really realy like this one to maybe you should try to add puncuation at the end of the paragraphs

[kill the innocents]

just dont rip the.. a very honest poem.. good job.. i like it.. :)

[Chelsea]

I know exactly the feeling. I'm pretty much in the same boat as you. Sucks, eh?
I find writing though, to really help me.
This is a really good poem. Very honest with yourself.

[Drako]

ah doubts, this is something we all experience. and when we're going through those hard times, doubt becomes second nature. friendly advice, as i always do, is to never shut yourself down. don't second guess. if it feels right, then go for it. follow your heart and things will look up for you

[+Naomi+]

My honest opinion? This rocked!
I really like the lines:
"I’ll stand up
I’ll show my scars
Just don’t rip them"
I can get that in this, you're afraid (obviously) lol.
All in All, I will say it again, This rocked!