Wishes

Wishes

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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Read It My Dear Friends

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I am not here
I am not here
I have this great fear

I wish for this to end
I wish for this to end
This endless pain has no end

I sob and weep
I sob and weep
I cannot sleep

I will not stand for this s**t
Not anymore
I am not here
Without fear
I wish for my sorrow to end
I wish that I could send
My troubles away
Just for a f*****g day
I sob and I weep 
At six am I still can’t sleep

I wish for this fire to burn
To hold on to my body
Until I lie in my grave
If the candle is blown
Then I have not shown
My strength nor my hate
I guess I have to call it fate
I sob and weep
At six am I still can’t sleep

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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Compartment 114
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It felt like I was reading a song lyric, very well done babe!
I love it.
Keep it up!

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 13 Years Ago


its amazing i really really like this

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its amazing.. i love the last stanza.. i like it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ville være fed som en sang! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ah the familiar darkness, beginning of the light of the 6 AM hour. damn i hated that hour. i've had many a night where i lay awake and looked over to see that time on the clock. it's really a rough period when one is going through hardships.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow a beautiful poem!
I can't explain but it's a really good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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