Insecurity

Insecurity

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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New Poem.. Chapter 8 of School will be out soon

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So this is supposed to be a love poem. I guess I want to say that I feel like we’re so close yet so far apart. It’s not even possible for us to crush over each other seeing how your in a relationship. I know that I’ve said this a million times tonight but please just listen. I am so afraid I’ll f**k up your relationship. And don’t think about dating me. I’m not suited for having a girlfriend. I’m depressed as hell. You know that. My social anxiety is getting worse every single second. I want to give you so much, that I am not quite sure I have. But this is just a poem I know it doesn’t mean anything. Or maybe it does. I cannot be sure what you’ll think. But hey I think I’m in love with you.

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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FallenHeroXx
Honest Oppinion.. Seeing how it's my first love poem

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hmm, not sure it's fair to say it's your first love poem. maybe your first poem to someone you're with and currently feel for. but love shows in a lot of your work, because you've loved so much. it's just your others also show pain.

this too, shows pain, but a different kind of pain. it hurts to love someone but know that you can't be with them. you know you're not ready, plus she's with someone else. it's very big of you not to ask her to leave who she's with but instead to tell her to remain there. it show maturity that you know you love her, but know that you cannot give her what she needs

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like this poem, I know I read it when you sent it to me, but I still do like it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


hmm, not sure it's fair to say it's your first love poem. maybe your first poem to someone you're with and currently feel for. but love shows in a lot of your work, because you've loved so much. it's just your others also show pain.

this too, shows pain, but a different kind of pain. it hurts to love someone but know that you can't be with them. you know you're not ready, plus she's with someone else. it's very big of you not to ask her to leave who she's with but instead to tell her to remain there. it show maturity that you know you love her, but know that you cannot give her what she needs

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like this poem

Posted 13 Years Ago



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