Happieness So Eternal

A new thing i wrote

Like a body passing through the fire

It has only one desire

The look on it’s face

It’s time for race

Death closing in

Body of sin

Please let me in

To your guardians shrine

I shall not weep nor shall I whine 

I am surely to be here

Without any fear

I sit here now reflecting on the last couple of months

I cannot change what’s been done

Despite my fear and dread

I am not dead

I am not dead

I won’t stop, and I won’t say I’ve had enough

I mustn’t give in, not to this

Despite my fear and dread

I am not dead 

I am not dead

I wanna jump off this edge, maybe I need to face it?

I want to give in and get that over with

Despite my fear and dread

I am not dead

I am not dead

I should c**k it and pull it

But that won’t do s**t

Despite my fear and dread

I am not dead

I am not dead

I wanna rot, rot with the corpses

They carry a smell that seems familiar

Despite my fear and dread

I am now dead

I am now dead

Author's Note

Honest oppinion

Reviews

[Drako]

oh and here i thought this would've been a happier piece. i know times are really hard for you and i hope someone does something for you during this holiday season to brighten your day. you seem like a nice guy with too big of a heart that's had it broken. just remember to keep fighting each day. death is never the answer. in time you'll see the reasons for your life to continue, and your struggle won't even feel like a struggle

[Coyote Poetry]

Death is the great mystery. I wonder is there a better place? I knew four people who have killed them selves. Left a sadness for many to try to understand. A powerful poem. When someone is so low. Death is sweet. Maybe they need to find a better place to be. Great story with a sad ending.
Coyote

[Red Brick Keshner]

The "guardian's shrine"... now that is a very profound concept. That might deserve to be expanded into it's own poem or even short fiction. Maybe a new writing challenge.

[KAREN]

Very deep! Could almost be a song! Good job!!

[*skittlez*]

i think this is really kool