Christmas

Christmas

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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My christmas poem

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This is for Christmas
I like Christmas 
It reminds me of my youth
Before I got so troubled 

Mistletoes hanging in the living room
I got my first kiss from a girl
Under a mistletoe
Before I got so troubled

I like the way that you see a town change
Change from black to white
Almost from day to day
Before I got so troubled

My parents said to me once
It’s better to give than to get
Is that why I kill myself to help others?
Before I got so troubled

I love the presents too
They actually make me happy
I hope they will this year too
Because now I’m troubled

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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FallenHeroXx
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I like Christmas for the same reason.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was an excellent write, for all of us feel trouabled at times, but in time find happiness! Enjoyed this!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I believe Christmas is for kids. Trouble comes to the most of us. I was in trouble a lot in my days in the Army in 1977-1980. A positive view on Christmas in your poem. I like it. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


it's nice that you can still enjoy the holidays. i certainly hope someone does something special for you to brighten you up a bit this year. it sounds like you could really use something special and unexpected

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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