Final touches

I wrote it while thinking of some line i couldn't remember... Still can't remember it though

I sit here

Trying to pick up

Pick this broken sanity up of the floor

But I can’t seem to fight this

Even though I hate to say this

I think I need help

My mind has turned

Before this it was colorful and peaceful

Now it’s black and raging

I don’t want anymore of this

I don’t want these pictures of her

I don’t want this kiss

I will only make it harder

Harder for me to 

To get over her

 

Or so she said

All the scattered pictures 

running through my mind

Of her and I 

When we were together

I’ve reached and all time low

I broke something when I hit rock bottom

I think my sanity died

I still have a depression

I almost had you

Almost loved you

Why can’t you realize it

I want to be with you

Whenever it overtakes you

I can rid you of it

This goddamn disease your having

F**k I get so insecure

every time I think of it

I can’t f*****g stand it anymore

I am so, so disenchanted

I can’t do it anymore

Author's Note

Honest Oppinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and strong poem. The internal struggle to hold on leave a empty spot that need to be fulfilled. My father told me. "Best way to forget a woman is to find another." Anger and disappointment will blind you from the good. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Calypso]

I love this. My favorite line was 'pick this broken sanity up of the floor'.

[RebeccahCecile]

This is a great poem! shows a lot of emotion. Your really talented.

[Drako]

a very good poem, yet again. and now we move on to the advice section of the review that i inevitably give you every time

the things we go through in our past are merely lessons meant to teach us for the future. while it is necessary to remember and reflect, it is unhealthy to dwell entirely on it. use these poems as your outlet, to let it all go and move on. and if, as you say, you need help, don't be ashamed to seek it.

[*skittlez*]

very good poem i agree with morgan and kelsie

[Morgan]

good job, i agree with kelsie

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

One mistake: "Pick this broken sanity up of the floor" -Should be off not of.
But, I think this was very good- and full of emotions.