Another One

Just a school poem

I wanted her to fill

Fill me up with hope

But still

I was filled anger, hate and sorrow

I had not encountered my friend

Depression at that time

But she came for me

When we were over

I felt in a crisis

Everything seemed to dark

I got out

I was filled with nothing but sorrow and regret

I was with my friend

Depression

But she left

I finished it, I hope I did

Now my friend sees himself in a crisis

And I feel like I, I am lost in this

F*****g darkness

I am filled with fear, anxiety because

I don’t want him to think that way

Even though it’s understandable

I don’t want him to leave

I don’t want him to live in fear

Author's Note

Honest oppinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to fall into fear. Anxiety make us feel there is no escape. You told a powerful story. All of us will need a friend to pick us up. I was saved many times and I hope I returns the favor to a few. Last lines in the poem is what a good friend would desire. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[David Keagan]

It's good to have someone there for us as well as to be equally as kind in helping them. i really like this one, straight forward, full of emotion, great format, flow, etc. keep up the good work

[*skittlez*]

judging from this you are a very nice person at heart i think you would make a good friend to everybody very caring also

[Drako]

judging from this, you are a sweet person at heart, very caring, and a true friend. hopefully you and your friend can help each other through your tough times.