My Dear Friend

Just for one of my friends

To the one i know

To the one i miss

You're still here

No-one hates you

Try to see the light

The light that you give

It could might even save you

I know you're about to give in

Just don't please don't 

I wouldn't be standing if you weren't here

And just to quote you

"I'm a guy who struggles with extreme depression.

Nobody sees the lies behind my laughter or the struggle behind my smile.

I'm every girls' "best friend" but nothing ever more.

I need help but it seems like nobody wants to give it to me. My time may be running out.

I'm classified as a gifted student, get great grades, and have a passion for science and people with mental disabilities.

People always tell me how lucky I am, and how successful I'll be in the future.

Truth is, I don't want a future. All I can see is how awful and cruel this world is. I hate this." 

This was what you showed me

I mean i love you

in a way i can't describe

Just stay here for me

And for the people who'd miss you

I need you here 

To talk to for five hours

Whenever i need it 

You listen to me

I can cry to you

So stay just stay

Toke Nielsen

Stay with me

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told a good story. Life can seem to be a dead end. But we need to find some good in a life. I like the story in the poem. We will battle till our last breath. Need to hold on and be thankful for the good people who enter our life. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Drako]

this was rather sweet to me. a very moving plea to this person to stay. i rather hope this person is touched and listens.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This didn't flow well, but it was still good.