Just For A Night

Honest Oppinion

How come I got kicked through

There is nothing left to do

Or that’s what I feel

It is still her I miss

I still want her kiss

It’ll make us everlasting

Or throw me into everlasting fear

And make my anxiety come near

I Hate it. Not her but this

All of this has brought me down.

Beaten and battered me.

Made me hate myself

Thought I had just a slight chance of surviving

Just for a night

Fear brought me here

I am coming clean

Yes in the beginning I wasn’t sure

If I really loved you

You were just to pretty for me

I hate it. Not her but this

I still feel shattered. Torn.

I f*****g feel Ripped apart

I just wanna dream without waking

At least stop the f*****g nightmares

Just for a night

Author's Note

Honest Oppinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Strong emotion and powerful poetry. I like the repetition of the words
"I hate it. Not her but this"
I like the story and the very good ending. When two people separate. Easy to become the guilty one. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Brian Kraklau]

true love will come in time, never wait for love that wont exist, understand that as long as you lay awake and wide eyed you will see when love passes you by and nothing will stop you, trust that the darkness is only a failure to be understood to find the right path

[Red Brick Keshner]

I particularly enjoyed how the title lead me to expect a different poem altogether. What a pleasant surprise that it turned out another way.

[Shannon Math]

Great writing piece! :)

[OR]

A night won't make a much of difference when it comes to pain
But I hope you'll get better
Peace!

[Drako]

such an accurate description of the pain you feel after a breakup with a person you obviously still care for. just remember, after the pain the sun comes out again