Just For You

Just for you

A scene kid thinking

I do not understand

I scream towards you 

And I leave

I always leave

I can’t take these fights

I hate my discouraging intuition

I was a total sucker for you

I was so f*****g phony

I actually would have changed

Just for you

You understood me

Or so you said

You were so f*****g fake to me

Didn’t like my music or my style

But loved me anyway or so you said

You left me with a mark of fear

And a shitload of scars that will never be healed

I ditched my friends Some of them stood by me

I actually did that 

Just for you 

I am still standing 

Even though I took all of your pain

I believe I’ve overtaken you anxiety

I am afraid to fall in love now

I am afraid that the next girl will do as you did

Just f**k me over and leave me in the side of the road

I have gone all the way for and with you

I loved you, I still do

That’s what kills me I love you, How the f**k could I fall for you

Just for you

Author's Note

Just me thinking and i wrote it down... So honest oppinion...

Reviews

[kij143]

The 6th line in the last stanza you write "In the side of the road" Perhaps you meant "On the side of the road"
Anyways, I really liked it, you had a nice use of repetition, though I think the swearing diminishes the poem, It side tracks and effects the mood of the poem. well, Its good to have an outlet. keep writing(:
~KIJ

[mir]

I like the way you clearly describe your emotional feelings through your venting out---you demand to be understood---this is much better than keeping it inside you and letting it build up. But after a situation like this cools down, you can think things out, take it with a grain of salt, go on with your life, and think positively in using this experience for a much better relationship with someone, someday when you least expect it, whom you can be SO MUCH happier with. Good expression of your feelings.

[Drako]

this is a feeling some of us experience a lot. heartbreak is the most difficult thing to deal with. and it always leaves you with that fear of falling in love again. Your heart is your most precious possession, and to give it to another is the ultimate act. to have that person essentially throw that in your face is an indescribable pain. you'll always remember the pain, but in time, you will move on. you have to remember that somewhere, that perfect girl is waiting for you. we all deserve to love and be loved in return. so in the end, you stand strong. never let your fear keep you from falling in love again. the next one shouldn't pay for the mistakes of the last. my favorite part of this is the line that says "I'm still standing". take back the power she took from you. you may never really come to terms with falling for her, but at least you can stand tall in the end

[Morgan]

your a very good writer. I love your last two lines(:

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really good. A lot of people can relate to this in high school.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Emotions are a great tool and the easier you can tap into them the more passionate your write. This is a great start to a long love affair with words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love allow us to lose our mind. We always want what isn't good for us. Just must be added lesson to many more a coming. I like the description and story. Love is hard to find. And very hard to forget. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Full of emotions and true honesty. To make it alittle better- you could use different words for the curses? That's just my thought. Great job.

[Shannon Math]

I love this poem! It reminds me why some people fall in love too fast and fall hard. :)