Sorry

Sorry

A Poem by FallenHeroXx

I'm searching for the perfect way
to apoligize
But she dissapointed me
She failed me when i needed her the most
i gave into her lust
but the fire in her eyes
and the desire
I cannot find a way to continue anymore
i want to give in sadly
i can't take it anymore
i thought we could be together forever
but i failed her that night
Her anxiety attack made me panic
so strong
NO
Damn her still i choke on that lie
not reeling i'm strong even though i'll just keep
it caged inside forever
until the day i burst
burst in to fire 
and die right before her f*****g eyes
She would start crying as my blood hit the floor
the whole school would gather to see my suicide
the cold steel that hits my atories
and then i drop
i drop to the floor cramping
i bleed to death on the floor
she would get an attack and die with me
we could be together forever in death

Jette Moesgaard
I am truly f*****g sorry
But it is the way i feel

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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I like this one a lot! This is definitely one of my favorite poems ever!!!!(: Keep up the work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, that was powerful and dark. a very interesting way to let someone know that they hurt you

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awe...this is really powerful...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vivid. Intensely so. Powerful.
*hugs*

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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