Just a Little piece

Just a Little piece

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
"

A song

"
Lost inside - LaVey
Pre Verse
I'm not mad
I'm Not MAD
I'M NOT MAD
Verse
you heard me whisper
a silent secret
only made to dissapoint me
you whispered to my ear
i love you
and then you left

Chorus
A silent scream
pierces my heart
it is so hard
to live without love
but i can make it
Pre verse
i'm not sad
i'm not sad
I AM NOT SAD
Verse
You are breaking me down
why can't you accept that i love you
is it just to much
or was it all in vain
there's still the stain
on the carpet
Chorus
A silent scream
pierces my heart
it is so hard
to live without love
but i can make it
B-Part
Am I Deranged
Am I Insane
I Wanna Die
Just f*****g Die
X2
Chorus
A silent scream
pierces my heart
it is so hard
to live without love
but i can make it

© 2010 FallenHeroXx


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Very vivid and descriptive. Very powerful and emotional, could be a little more flowy in places, but on the whole I like it :D

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FallenHeroXx
FallenHeroXx

Brande, Danmark, Denmark



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