Rain

Just a short thing of emotions

Rain 

It’s a funny thing

When you are sad 

It seems somewhat symbolic

But when you are happy

You hate it

Sadness

When you are happy 

You hate it

But when you are sad

It seems like a dark trap

I love standing in the rain

It makes me feel free 

It makes me feel alive

I hate rain

I hate being in love

Just because I’ve tried

Only bad things with love

I love love

Author's Note

Jsut tell me what you think

Reviews

[Shay]

the poem is really good. i could connect with it perfectly and the lines flowed very well.

[Joshua Smit]

quite good, though i actually like rain when om both happy and sad.
and i have never actually experienced love, so i cant comment much on that...
could do with some punctuation tho

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. A warm day and rain. A long walk allow you to feel peace and comfort at the same time. I like the ending. Your words are true. Love will drive us nuts but we can't live without it. A excellent poem,.
Coyote

[I'llPlayTheJuliet]

I think is wonderful..
Acurate to say the least..