I

Pieces

That seem connected

But the never were

Losing myself

I am without the proper

Lifestyle

I am not special

I am not unique

I am not special

I never were

I

I am not

Complete

I am tied to this

I have not let myself go yet

I never have

I burn

I bleed

I bruise

And eventually I'll die

Bliss for all around me

ignorance

They will not remember me

You will not remember me

I don't even remember me

I

I have been left with this uncertainty

That I shouldn't have become this

This infantile monster

Discriminating the less intelligent

I cannot find my meaning

Author's Note

Honest Opinions

Reviews

[misha]

Quite powerful. Great write!

[Dayran]

Sitting on an ox in search of an ox ... is a Zen expression ... that points to how well we make meaning of something ... while in search of meaning. Nice.

[stars are far]

that is strong feelings..well done ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard and direct emotions in the poem. We are always hardest on ourselves. I like the flow of thoughts leading the reader to the statement at the end. "I cannot find my meaning". Hard world today. We must see beyond the s**t we are given. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote