Playing in the Rain.<3

Rain, rain,

Never go away.

Wash away my pain,

Stay for the day.

Dark clouds,

Bright intentions,

Clear the crowds.

In the water, soft indentions.

Dance in the street,

Throw up your hands and spin around.

Light on your feet,

Become unwound.

Laughter and smiles,

Becaome a child again for a minute.

You could walk miles,

And there is no limit.

Now stop.

Stand.

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good desire in this poem. A rainy day can relieve pain and make the pain flow away from the body.
"Dance in the street,
Throw up your hands and spin around.
Light on your feet,
Become unwound."
A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[*Evelen*]

This is an amazing poem! I love the rain. Well done. Thanks for sharing.