A Strangers Glance

A Strangers Glance

A Poem by Anjel
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a moment in time...a chance meeting

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The rain glittered on their chilled skin
As it sparkled like a fine diamond dust
A white hot raging fire blazed in their eyes
An undeniable and unspoken exchange of lust

They were but strangers to one another
A mere chance passing on a crowed street
He was drawn to her presence quickly
The scent of her was strong and sweet

She could not avoid his direct gaze
When he pinned her down with a glance
He wanted to reach out to touch her
Yet he could not make his body advance

The skies responded with a deafening roar
As the lightening split open the clouds
He started toward her with determination
But she had melted into the lively crowd

© 2009 Anjel


Author's Note

Anjel
in the blink of an eye one finds an undeniable attraction to another and in the next blink they are gone

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a very sad but beautiful poem , extremely well written ,

Posted 15 Years Ago


You have expressed a momentary attraction in well written poetic prose Although you rhyme well you pay no mind to meter The essential ingredieny which makes your words flow smoothly. Howver I enjoyed the tenor of your thoughts

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2009

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Anjel
Anjel

Columbus, OH



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I have 4 kids and work full time. In my spare time, I try to write as much as possible. Hope that you all enjoy what I have created. I also enjoy taking pictures, mainly of nature and hope to improve.. more..

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