My Elixir

my love for you is more then for your perfections

I know that you are not used to
Such words of love and devotion
But you my sweet darling
Are my elixir and strong potion

You are my strength when I am weak
My protection from the storms
The intoxication that fills me
As a deeper love is formed

My senses are overwhelmed
Every time that you are near
There is no where else I’d rather be
Then laying with you here

I don’t love you for your perfection
I find the beauty in your flaws
You are my only desire and love
I will always answer when your heart calls

Your touch is nothing short
Of the greatest feeling I have ever known
The love displayed in your eyes
Is all that I need to be shown

I adore your every movement
As I treasure every smile on your lips
With each kiss bestowed upon me
I feel my heart leap and skip

I cherish you deep within my soul
And bask in every second spent together
It is in your heart that I found my heaven
And it is there that I wish to remain forever

Author's Note

my love for you is wide open and bare before you.

Reviews

[Paladin4life]

Thank you very much for entering my competition! I enjoyed the poem and I enjoy the emotion it portrays. My only suggestion would be to fine tune the rhyme scheme in order to make it consistant throughout the poem. I enjoyed it greatly as is though! Thanks again for sending me this poem!

[deeps]

This is wonderful and full of emotion.
Like this write bunches