Broken Pieces

Broken Pieces

A Poem by Anjel
"

to lose love and letting it all go

"

Alone in the velvet dark
Surrounded by the remains
Of my shattered heart

Shards embedded deep
In my bleeding soul
As my weary spirit weeps

I cannot breathe anymore
My flesh is torn and tattered
My body is crumpled on the floor

I want to let go of this pain
To let go of my grip on you
But you are my permanent stain

Giving in to the inner voice
That guides my trembling hand
This is no longer my choice

Crimson blood pours out in rivers
I do not want to carry on without you
The cold sets in as my body shivers

I give up my last hope and dream
Letting you flow out of my mind
With my last breath your name I scream

Broken pieces floating in my blood
There is no use for this life now
I have lost your perfect love

© 2009 Anjel


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loved it...as others said..the flow here is perfect..really kept me going...
great write once again...
:D

Posted 15 Years Ago


Such a emotional write here, I can feel this.
Like the flow of this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


So sad, but amazing work. The flow is perfect and the imagery is flawless. There's so much emotion in each and every line of this piece. Great work!

-Howl

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 10, 2009

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Anjel
Anjel

Columbus, OH



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I have 4 kids and work full time. In my spare time, I try to write as much as possible. Hope that you all enjoy what I have created. I also enjoy taking pictures, mainly of nature and hope to improve.. more..

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