Suicide Note

Not committing suicide #suicide #sad #pain

Dear mother, father, brothers, and friends,
What is happiness, but a trend?
I never found it, but I did crave it.

I spent day and night crying over a lost love,
A lost chance, a forgotten friend, a speck of dust.
Everywhere I looked, I saw the beauty I couldn't find in me.
And it pained me so. It pained me quite so.

A wonderful world ruined by a broken soul
Is not such a wonderful world, is it?
I could not stand ruining other people's happiness,
When I knew I would never find it.

Once, a friend told me that just like love,
Happiness finds you.
But I guess the line was long enough already,
And all the operators were occupied.

I shall join all the forgotten souls,
All the dead ones somebody used to love or hate.
In happiness, in love, in bliss, in joy, in death.
Goodnight, and joy be with you all.

Reviews

[Demii]

This is well written, I like the wording you used, and how it was broken down into different parts explaining, its sad, but its really well.

[Casey Nicolee]

You really made an impact on me.

[wordsofheart]

Nicely written and sad also. It is very good as a poem but I hope that you do find happiness in your life cause life is just too short to spend it with a frown.
Great Work!

p.s.Keep smiling always :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Dark, but wonderful.

My suicide note wouldn't compare.

Nicely done.