I had a good Chance meeting with Jesus

What a dope deal gone wrong.

I had a good chance meeting with Jesus 
 

I snorted Cocaine and shoot up on Acid Speed, For I wanted to meet this Jesus very fast. I knew my life was on an edge of path, In this dope filled world the pusher man Had control over my life, Something wasn't going right. I was snorting the Cocaine snow the kind that reddens your nose. Until you look like some bozo and the pusher making you out to be his clown, Kicking your a*s all around town, you minds made up you can't get off the stuff. It's Like a natural high you can't get enough if you tired, Dope will only make you stupid, crazy and crave more. It will ride through your vines and bleed you until you can bleed on more, What a sorry sight you will have become, starving for food and only feeding on drugs. Now you're just under the gun, wondering who is going to pul your plug, When It is your time to go, from this world to the next what do you expect to see, Desperate angels all around ready to save you, from your deadly mistake of life. Snorting cocaine and injecting drugs into you vines For that is a dead no brainer, You're going to lose this time, your life is going to run out of luck. You should of turned To Jesus much sooner, then you did just in time to save you soul, before you are dead.

Reviews

[wordman]

great poem falcon,and the troll below my post,delete it and block him,he is hemingway don`t u know..

[Davidgeo]

You meant to say "you shot up acid speed..." in the first line.

Also a typo on the last line of the second stanza.

The error's continue... I'm not going to list everyone of them. You really need to proof read before you post cowboy.

To be honest, this reads like a "scared straight" propaganda piece or a stereotyped made for TV movie. You come across as judgmental, simplistic, "high and mighty".

As an addict you should know, that is the wrong way to address this topic.

Something tells me you're not really an addict though. I fear you might be claiming something for fashionable purposes. Not cool.