Two special Woman

Two Woman Daughter's they are too me.

Two special woman In My Life

Came to me through my wife

We had children at a young age

We loved them both the same

Amy my First born

Sweet and kind

Becky my Second born

Respects me all the time

Both mind the P's and Q's

With words that tell me

How much they have love me through and through

Time and Time again

I have so much love for these two

Daughters I love much

I give my best advice

and then let them make up their own minds

I don't force an issue

I listen without judgement

They are quit witty 

Both of them I am proud to call them my Daughter's

They have their concerns about me

Am I taking good care of myself

Taking my meds on time

Eating the right foods and portion sizes

I'm finally losing some weight 

Listening to my Daughter healthy food quiz

and the weight is coming down

healthy way of life is working

I glad they have taken a active rule

In my healthy eating habits

and that I can grab a hold of myself

before it gets to late to do things right.

God Bless both of these young ladies

I could not be so healthy without their input

What goes around comes around

Love is here to stay today tomorrow and Always.

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

It's always nice when children care. This is such a lovely heartwarming poem, written in interesting family way. Thumbs up.

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