She broke that old heart of mine

She broke that old heart of mine

A Poem by Falcon1
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broken hearted love affair

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Cathy was a very special gal of mine
She loved and we didn't have to spend a dime
all she really wanted was my time 
talking and writing poetry

Using words in love games
Cathy explaining how she is going to get her way
She broke that old heart of mine
With a broken hearted love affair

She invited another to share a kiss
I wasn't feeling the love of this actions
I Lost my affection for Cathy Girl
I don't play second fiddle

or her sweet kisses could go bitter
I'm not her pole sitter
waiting around for a date
When I know she is going to be late

and the promise broken in two
Two timing me over you
Broken my heart
Yes my heart broken in two

NO You're not my steady Gal
You have set me up for the blues
With you I want nothing to do

© 2018 Falcon1


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Nice movement of words and thoughts led to sad ending. Sometime old heart had no chance. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


it is very painful to be taken as a second option when you already love someone. you devote yourself to them and the end is to be used. i know this feeling

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hello, Falcon.

Accurately, this poem reflects the character of a naive woman which "pollinates another flower every day" and the thoughts of an emotionally damaged man. Those two personages used to dance between his verses, but suddenly, the female character found a better "poem". A tragedy silently followed these actions:
After the girl's poem withered, she wasn't able to come back to her old flower, because the flower she left became a private garden of roses and lilies...

Those verses could fit into an 80s/90s song. The poem reminds me of "American girl".
The truth is that you're becoming a better writer...
Keep writing!

Good luck!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Falcon1

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review.
Jes' Pi

6 Years Ago

My pleasure.
feels sad when we get our hearts broken.women don`t realize the power they possess over us

Posted 6 Years Ago



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