Just another romantic Poem

For the love that lives in my heart

She thought she could break my heart

But I knew better from the start

I love her so much I would never let her go

To another arms and my secrets would be a mist

Our love would not be so bliss

But with every love gun in my heart

I had it filled with Rose colored bullets

That would tie our heart strings together

and if when time was up

we would be as light as a feather

we would float together

Heaven bound we would be measured

as we prayed together we would stay together

I see a life long commitment to one and other

everything is fair in love and war

I must protect my family

and my home from other intruders

enemies spies comandos 

other waring parties 

Yes the unbreakable has struck again

the unsinkable heart will never be broken

my heart was made of steel

It can be molten hot or cold rolled

I set my eyes on you lady

you better hide you heart

I coming for it from the start

Meet me at the corner cafe

For coffee Tea or me

I will sweep you off you feet 

this time I will make it a complete sweep

you will lose your balance and fall into my ever

loving arms and you shall feel my charms

Now you been alarmed.

Reviews

[Taino]

Very moving poem. The line that touched me most was the "the unsinkable heart will never be broken", the passion, the devotion you feel so deeply is brought forth. Great job! Please keep writing!

[barleygirl]

One of my particular gripes on this website is the abundance of love poems that all sound similar. Here we have a sparkling example of writing a romantic message that sounds like no other! That's what I'm coming to enjoy the most about your writing, the way you have a distinct point of view & uninhibited word flow! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Falcon1]

WOW I tickled Pink