She said Move on then she was Gone

Love Gone Wrong

Crystal streams on the waters

Can't you see I miss her

this is how its supposed to be

No silver lining on the ship out to sea

She said move on then she was gone

I sat and wondered if there was any thing I could had done

To make another outcome

But she was on a new ship 

headed for a new land

and I was never to see her again

Two wooden ships separated us now

I started to not give a dam about her anymore

I knew I would feel better a few years from now

When I meet up with the new bar maid

in that new Boston town

New England would be my new found home

exploring the new world

Was all that was on my mind

Native people of all kind

to forget what I have left behind

Old Girl stand behind me

I'm In the new world now

Stand bright and tall

not feeling kind of small

Lots of woman over the ocean

would love to spent their time with me

You were just one woman left behind

and forgotten in the Old world

Reviews

[Sonakshi Arora]

Wow this is so good! Reference of a woman and combining it with the personality of a ship is what makes the poem interesting! Very well composed
Thanks for sharing