Happy and I know why

Happy and I know why

A Poem by Falcon1
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I'm happy and I know why
Because my girl friend left me for another guy
My Standards are changing
My stomach is weak
I just can't get my girl out of my head
I need me a shrink
She was a sweet hearted woman
She called me her man
But the times they were a changing
and you know times do not stand still
She took another look in another direction
My love for her had died
along with my pride
I had to follow a new guide
climb a new ladder
to the new heights
Where the other woman of my heart 
may be waiting for me
A simple love I look for
to ease me pain of love lost
Could it be another girl with a warm embrace
That could take the place of my old girl
and erase the image I have of her face
Could it Be You Girl Baby Girl

© 2017 Falcon1


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I like this, not too flowery and to the point. I would say it's quite good but the middle could be a bit better, it's not as interesting or gripping as the rest.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Falcon1

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your input on this poem it is well respected from my perspective.

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59 years young father of 2 girls in they late 20's early thirty's have 3 Grand children one a boy and two darling little girls boy age 7 Girls ages 4 and 1 and they are lots of fun. I enjoy writing po.. more..

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