#1 Alone

#1 Alone

A Poem by Fake
"

Bare with me.

"
Starting in the middle,
here I am,
alone.
Though I'm not really alone.
I look around and no one is there,
but that is only because,
you are 2000 miles away.
Why can't you be closer?
I want to be able to hear your voice,
everyday.
I want to see you.
Not through the lens of a cell phone camera,
(Though I still like it)
but with my own two eyes.
I can't truly look into your eyes, 
and smile over video chat.
I don't even get the chance to,
you don't want to video chat.
Why?
We called once...
I want to call again..
I don't think you want to though.
This makes me feel alone.
You should know

© 2017 Fake


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A tale of frustrated yearning. If they do get together, will it last? Sometimes the yearning is sweeter than the reality.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very nice! is this a long distance relationship?

Posted 6 Years Ago


This poem is sad. And makes me disappointed. Makes me question why this insignificant other doesnt want to or cannot video call again... Very beautiful read

Posted 7 Years Ago


(wipes away tears) This poem speaks to my very soul.

Posted 7 Years Ago


love is something beyond the borders, distance never matter. nice writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Fake

7 Years Ago

True, but sometimes distance makes love harder. It can't always be something that is beyond the bord.. read more
long distance love,you need to be together but it`s just not happening,you feel alone

Posted 7 Years Ago


Fake

7 Years Ago

You are exactly right.. Sadly, there is not much you can do about it...

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Added on May 25, 2017
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