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I was looking to the clouds.

And I yelled out to them. HEY! Don’t leave me,

here in  this retched, dusty house; I have ancient parents and a brother afraid of the light.

 

I cursed to the sun, its lazy eyes let the day slowly waste me away.

I have some friends in the city, a bunch who left me here for dead.

; Why haven’t they come for me!? Like I said, I'm wasting away!

Stupid sun. watching me lay dead.

 

My parents are angry; blood pulsating to their heads.

We scream & dispute: this charade never ends.

 

; Now the suns getting tired.

It’s the night I desire.

I breathe in the sweet air. It’s a high like no other.

My head is light already, just standing under light of the street post.

 

I have no plans. I'm a dreamer in the night.

The stars are agleam, a stunning scatter that I praise.

I watch in muted envy.

 

Now my mouth is starting to twitch. I feel it.

; That craving. That burn in my throat.

The smoke that makes my each step a tumble,

And each thought a dreamy bubble.

I want a cigarette. I resist.

This moment, This high, is far to perfect without it.

 

So this is me. My life in the summer

; Dreary morning to start, a horrid struggle to subsist.

And in the end still lonelygirl4227.

Author's Note

So i realize this follows no real rhythm or poetry style. But i love it, mistakes and all. I was actually sitting under a street lamp outside of my house while i wrote this. And omg, it completely captures the just of my summer. it just made me so happy! So of course comments are welcome at its utmost brute manner. though know i won't change the poem, it's just to perfect for me in all it's flaws and unperfectness. completely me. ^^

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

That was a remarkable walk through you life. A brief glimpse into that which is you. I liked it's rough and to the point manner and that it was not filled with foo-fooishness!

I find that sometimes that's the only way to capture a moment in time with honest perspective.

Great Write!
Aaron Maycroft

[JRB]

Keep up the work, you have thoughts to express, enjoyed the read
Jan/Uisiom