I am a human being!

I am a human being!

A Poem by Faizan tariq

No existence, no time to fly by
Got my soul, highest sky

Good and evil, mighty bet
Go to earth, see what you’ll get

Growing inside, living sleep
Day of delivery, time to weep

Push and push, pull it out
Sigh of relief, other crying out loud

Welcome to the world, nameless lad
Crying madly, take me back

Loving smiles, tireless care
You can hope, won’t you dare?

Walk about, roam the gift
The life you’re given, time to shift

Heavy shoulders, lighter minds
Learn the difference that tears and binds

Stars and medals, found the light
Blended in society, my approved might

Good means life, bad means death
Stare outside the window, what’s all this mess?

Oh Look at you, you’ve found mentality
Knock knock boy! Here comes reality

Confusion, disturbance, nothing’s fair
You can still hope, won’t you dare?

Struggling stand, reasoning to find
Light shoulders, heavier minds

Arms of protection, lap of affection
Constant neglection, utter depression

Wandering wandering, up and down
Look for something, you’re on your own

Eyes connected, biology spiked
Her! What a beautiful sight

Found a reason, down on one leg
Come on nameless! time to beg

Spelled out feelings, nothing mattered
Pick up the pieces, scattered scattered

Broken heart, empty chest
Shattered bones, eyes wet

World, better? System, right?
Dark and cold, comes the night

Eat, sleep, use your might
ALL THIS LIFE, ALL THIS LIFE

Mind rusty, sight blurry
“Time has come”, nameless, “Hurry!”

Hit the deadline, eyes bended
Wisdom clicked, life ended

Cold body, finally some rest
Lighter shoulders, mind and now chest

Open thy eyes, stop dreaming now
Time for judgment, get down and bow

*Goodbye peace, eternal slumber*
“Let’s see if you were bad or humble”

“But..why am i up..if I’m dead?”
“Heaven or hell, you made your bed”

Sleep? Rest?..Eternity to bare.
But you can still hope, won’t you dare?

Here i stand, walked such a long mile
Crying out river, apparent smile

Entered the door, pleasant or warm
Stares from here, there, and all around

“Who are you, nameless?” Everyone asking, seeing!
“Hello everyone, I’M A HUMAN BEING!”

© 2018 Faizan tariq


Author's Note

Faizan tariq
This is my first post ever of my writing, hoping to get reviews. Criticism is appreciated.

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Hi Faizan, I really like this! I honestly can't find any negative criticism, I think it is very well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Faizan tariq

6 Years Ago

Thank you, your review is appreciated.

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Faizan tariq
Faizan tariq

Multan, Pakistan