Ascendancy

Follow the scarf till it reveals your feelings,
Giving up is uncategorized, selfish addiction.
Like a goddess reaching out of the sea,
Let it wraps around you,
Let the waves cover it with sacred water.
Balanced heart and mind is like a diamond within the cave of countless stones,
Stones that make your inside space grow grey and faded.
Hear the silent whispers of souls around you.
We are all broken, standing on the cliffs drained by waves.
Serenely breathe drips in relaxation, adjustment to your own inner self.
Be like the child below the desk,
Watching with your panicking eyes the pain of being outside of your own body.
Watch the broken mannequins.
Having such a shocked eyes feels like a betrayal.
Betrayal of a beautiful world.
Don't get in the shell of confusion,
Don't grab the hands of an empty plastic mannequin.
Hold a hand of a broken soul full of its own solo melodies.
You are never coming home, lucky heart.
Ascend.

© 2015 R.A. Youngblood

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Meeks

The randomness is deliciously confusing. Good comparisons to broken, empty mannequins.

"You are never coming home, lucky heart." - you know, that is a great line. A final line. A feeling line. I gotta write that line down, I just might try to steal that one line if you don't mind. Applause to the author.
(Don't worry, I'll reword it. Just want the gist.)

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Hahah thank you :D

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Coyote Poetry

A amazing poem.
"Follow the scarf till it reveals your feelings,
Giving up is uncategorized, selfish addiction.
Like a goddess reaching out of the sea,
Let it wraps around you,
Let the waves cover it with sacred water. "
The above lines could stand alone. The poem told a story leading to the strong ending. To ascend to better place. Needed place for the most of us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote